My evaluation of Music magazine Video URL

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QVbWFkqnts4

new music magazine

I have edited my magazine and this is my final copy........

My front cover was too busy so i decided to cut out two pictures.
i also made the background transparent so the picture and the text would stand out more.






My double page spread didnt look very professional and the text was too ahrd to read.
i have now set a colour behind the text, this way it wouldbe easy to read and it would stand out.

This is my old music magazine.

My old cover page dosent look so professional it has too many pictures present on the cover and the text dosent stand out.


my double page spreads text is realy hard to read and it dosent match the page.
it also dosent look like my audience would be interesed to read it..

My final copy of my school magazine.